Friday 16 June 2017

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  1. Hi there, my name is Fadlan and I am a student in Manukau room at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like the way that you wrote so clearly and it is easy to understand. It made me think of when I did something very similar to this. Have you thought about putting more slides to it but I think you did some great work. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsfadlans.blogspot.co.nz.

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    1. hi its lochie thank you for your comment we finished the boom writer but we are starting up again now

      have a nice one
      lochie

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